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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
This is an intriguing story, and you've made a really good start here. You've done exactly what the genre demands - surrounded everything with mystery and suspense,and I have to admit I'm fascinated (and really, really curious) to find out who the killer is. The first part was incredibly dark, and you've captured it very well - it almost gave me chills, particularly the Imperius Curse. Given that you're writing this for the darkness challenge, you've certainly made an excellent start, and the way you've described the killer - twisted, cold, dangerous - is perfect. Really good scene-setting here too - Harry and Ginny as young parents, Ron and Harry as junior Aurors - I'm interested to see how they handle this case, especially given their own personal feelings against Umbridge. Nicely done and I look forward to reading more!

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