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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hi teh!

Here for review tag!

Wow! This was really, really well written. Kudos on such an original idea! I don't think it was stupid or weird. It was captivating. I could see how the concept would be mishandled by a novice writer, but not you.

Your description was beautiful and moving. I actually found myself caring about a prison!! I felt bad for it and was almost rooting for Grindelwald to win the battle with Dumbledore! The was you showed how Nurmengard cared for his master until the end was touching.

The little details you provided along the way were what made this story great. For example, the way that Nurmengard was born, the way he passed along the newspaper about the coming of Dumbledore , and the "green globes" of bitter fruit that grew on the vines were my favorites.

Fantastic story!

Beth

Author's Response: Hi Beth!

Thanks so much for stopping by and reading and reviewing my newest story! It's one that I wasn't sure about when posting, and you comments have been absolutely lovely, so thank you. ♥ I'm so pleased to hear that you thought it original.

Gah, glad you like descriptions. And I'm surprised to hear that you were rooting for Grindelwald! Wow, that usually doesn't happen!

All the details were so fun to write! Some of them were last minute additions, just to take up more space and pad things up a little - whoops, sounds like it didn't plan this too well... :P The strange fruit and plants were definitely not part of the original plan I had for this story.

Thanks so much for such a wonderful review, Beth! :D

-teh


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