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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Laura!

Wah, Barty and Regulus as a ship! How did I never think of this before as it just works so well? The beginning section of the chapter with them laughing and talking together was so cute and I was shipping them so much, and you wrote them so well. Ok, I had been seeing signs of it throughout, but this was the first chapter where it was really evident and I really wanted to kill Bellatrix for coming in and ruining it. Speaking of her, there was some fantastic characterisation with her, and I really thought she was going to have a go at them for being together but it was something possibly more sinister knowing her. Iím not really sure what to make of it, whether itís a sign of her being the murderer or thinking that Crouch is, hmmÖ

Hmm, so Pollux has a willÖ I always find that my suspicions almost naturally lie with the people who hold it because they are obviously either trying to hide it because it doesnít suit them or trying to prove itís there so they can claim their share on the inheritance. If itís the former, then I would be inclined to think that Pollux isnít the murderer but if itís the latter, who knows. Either way, Iíll be remembering this :P

I think Sirius is the character I always look forward to best because you show this fresh, new portrayal of him and it always draws me in no matter what heís doing. You really took care of your descriptions in this section too with the way you described the seals in his hands, and the wax too, and it was so vivid and great and I just loved it! I canít help but wonder what he found. The will which was meant to be lost in the fire perhaps? Or perhaps a note from the murderer? Either way itís very exciting!

A fab chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey Kiana! Thanks so much for stopping by - and I'm so sorry this response is so late! *hides* :)

Yay! Another convert! :P Haha, it's one of those ships I saw ages ago somewhere on the internet (as with everything, lol) and just kinda loved from the beginning. SO yeah, I couldn't resist including them in this... haha, it was a strange scene, tbh, completely caught me by surprise when I wrote it - so yeah, Bella comes in and ruins it all :P Ooh, there is a kind of reason for that, but I couldn't possibly say :P Ooh, good guesses... it could be either of them... they're both very suspicious ;)

Pollux has a will or Pollux has the will? It's important! :P Nah, the people with it are always suspicious it's true... I can't say which one it is, and why he's got it, but there is something to it and yeah you should definitely remember it! It might come up again soon ;)

Sirius! Wah, I'm so glad you like my Sirius! I know he's different to most versions of him, so I'm always so happy when people say they like him here. He's definitely found something important, and it's really definitely worth remembering for later - but I can't say what it is. A clue, for sure, though! :P

Gah, thank you so much for the wonderful review - I'm pretty sure my response was terrible, so sorry about that :P - and thank you so much for keeping reading this! :)

Aph xx


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