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Review:jessicalorewrites says:
Hey, I'm here because you requested a review on my topic! First off I'm going to answer each of your areas of concern and then add in my own little thoughts about different things that I like :)

1. Does the lack of plot take away from the story?
Absolutely not! I really like how creative this is in the sense that it doesn't necessarily have a plot, but the characterisation and overall arc is both interesting to read and very well done.

2. Do you like the portrayal of Luna in first person?
I'm going to be honest and say that at first I was a little apprehensive because I often find that first person Luna fics are too over-bearing for me. A lot of authors make her weirdness cringey. I'm glad to say that you don't! I LOVE YOUR LUNA SO MUCH! If J.K. Rowling was to write a Luna POV it would be exactly like this. The way you make her odd and unusual but not so weird its unreadable is commendable. I also find the way you make Luna very self-deprecating quite interesting to read because, again, this is not usually done well - but you make it work! I particularly love that she still has her innocent and naive ways despite the war.

3. Any Americanisms?
Nope! This was a seamless read in a British POV.

I'd just like to add that I really like the opening lines because I think it is very relatable for me and also for a lot of your other readership. Many people of Luna's age don't know quite what they want to do after school so it's reassuring - for me, anyway - to see that even someone as awesome as Luna can share the same concerns.

I added this story to my favourites because I love it! Thank you so much.

- Jess xo

Author's Response: Hi, thank you! Haha, I'm glad the plot-lessness wasn't bad. I never saw Luna as the type to tell a story with a clear, straight plot so I'm glad that worked haha.

Ooh wow thanks! I was initially apprehensive about writing her, too - so that is SO wonderful to hear, and saying it's like JKR would write? omg thank you. She is a very particular balance between perceptive and living in her own world, it makes for odd writing! :P

I'm glad you liked the opening lines and that you could relate to them! And wow thank you I'm so honored by the favorite. Thank you so much for your review!!

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