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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! I just read through all the chapters you have posted so far, and I really like this story!

Your descriptions are lovely. Dom is certainly something! I can understand how Faye feels a little overwhelmed by her (and the rest of her family, haha. That's a lot of people to meet all at once!) Anyway, I like the balance between Dom and Louis, too - between Dom's loud, overbearing personality and Louis's quieter snarkiness. I do wonder what will become of Dom's scheme to become famous... haha. I like that the main Weasley in this story is Dominique, because she doesn't get featured quite as much in fanfiction.

Sometimes, transfer students can be cliche but it doesn't feel that way here - so great job with that. You've built up a kind of mystery too, like why did Faye leave Beauxbatons, what happened there? And what happened to her mother? Things I suppose I will find out later on. But anyway I like the way you've set it up.

I'm trying to figure out what will be the primary ship of this story but it's all a mystery to me still, because Faye seems to think everyone is attractive! :P Hm, probably Albus though? I don't know that she necessarily likes him yet, but she does seem to like staring at him, and he likes her lack of disappointment that he's not James - so that's promising. :p All in all, this is a really entertaining story you've got so far. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I find the lot of them overwhelming as well so I empathize. And yes, Dom is...something.

Thanks again. I feel like I ended up using a few cliches (transfers, James the Quidditch star, Dom the selfish blonde, Rose/Scorpius) so hopefully they don't feel tired. Time will tell.

Ha, Faye at this point is so unfamiliar with people in general that the sight of a male is exciting. But yes, you'll see. It's revealed fairly quickly. Glad you like it!


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