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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi teh!

So, wow. This is unlike any story I have ever read. Such strong, powerful writing and vocabulary. really brilliant.

Before I forget, I'd like to express my astonishment at how superb that scene was, when Gellert would try to write to Albus, and then Nurmengard would be all, "oh no you didn't" except not like a fashionista such as that but more like:

The Master will not write to Dumbledore.

like whooaaa stuff just got reaaal. Seriously I loved that part so much.

The fact that all of this was written in a way like this was so chilling. Seriously great writing, because it was a building but like whoa. I can't really express my feelings right now because this whole piece just makes you think and you've done a really great job at taking emotions to a whole other level.

Grindelwald as always was portrayed so well and he is so hard to write the struggle is actually real and you just do him so well every time it makes me so jealous like WHY can I not write him like that god I just make him sound like a pathetic girl *rolls eyes*

And seriously. Your summary/opening is so brilliant. Amazing writing. Everything you write is so different and I really think you have a knack for looking at things in a different way, and you are a true story teller.
(go write OF!)

I really enjoyed reading this piece teh, very cool and different. One of the most original fics I have read on this site! You truly are one of the best writers here.

Author's Response: Ooh, helloo Nadia!

You mean this is a very weird piece? I AGREE. What the devil was I thinking eep. But you compliments! ♥ THANK YOU.

...are you trying to seed more plunnies in my brain with fashionista!buildings? Because as you can see from this fic, I'll pretty much write any weird thing. And I do not have time for too much of this.

But yeah, I'm glad you liked that scene! I'm quite fond of that little segment as well, which is kinda like an interlude between the middle and the ending parts.

The more people point out to the building-ness of the fic, the more I kinda cringe and wonder if I did the right thing at all.

But ah, thank you for your comments on Gellert. I LOVE writing him; he's seriously such a fun-loving Dark Lord. OK, he's an evil jerk as well. You should totes write Grindelwald; seriously, I'll read it and I'd love to hear him sound like a 'pathetic girl'. Your writing is FAB. REPEAT. Your writing is FAB. Your writing is FAB. (When you're repeating, you should be replacing 'your' with 'my') ;)

Thank you, lovely! I'm a bit reluctant to write OF at the moment, but someday soon I'll try.

Sorry for the ridiculousness of this response, but honestly, your words as always, mean so, so much to me. ♥

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