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Review:HEG says:
Hey!

This story is so coool. No one ever really pays attention to The Weasley's ghoul so it's cool that you've thought about writing it and telling us a bit about it's life and acting skills. How come I haven't read this before. I love it! There are so many stories on the archives that I haven't read but I'm glad I came along this one.

I think your plot was unique and intersting. I don't think there are many stories on the archives about The Weasley's ghoul (if there ARE any). I like to see your interpretation on him aswell. I, for one, might have thought a little differently about him to you, but your way's great!

Your characterisation was good too. Although we hhardly know the ghost, you've portaryed him as a quite conceited person. He keeps telling us how good his acting is, yet never shows us. He sort of shows off about things he's been asked to do but declined to do them. I think your charcterisation of him when Ron, Fred, George and Hermione walked in was excellent. I like the way George or Fred was it? I'm alawys getting those two mixed up. Denied that the ghoul would be able to understand them then Hermione recites the line of an article. I think the bit where he says 'at last a true fan' hillarious. I don't know why :D

There wasn't much detail in this, but that's ok, beacuse it just fitted with the story so don't worry :) The emotions as I said earlier were conceited and show off-y. I sort of think that the ghould wished he HAD taken the job as an actor so he could prove himself that he WAS a better actor than Leonardo Decaprio and everyone else.

The bit of constructive critisism I would give you is to put a bit more of what they actually like DO and not just loads of speech. Other than that, awsome job!

HEG

Author's Response: Hi HEG, thanks for offering to review this!

Erm, I'm not really sure how this story came about. I think it was just a mixture of madness and wondering how on earth he hasn't had a story written about him before and realising that I need to change that and doing so with this :P I'm so glad that my interpretation worked for you though because I know everyone has their own view, so it means a lot you can see this too.

He definitely is and certainly does think an awful lot about himself, but writing those sorts of characters are a ton of fun as you can just do so many extreme things with them, it's brilliant! Erm, I can't remember which one said it as this was written over a year ago but I get what you meant! He's just a little insane really!

Yeah, it would have been fun if he had gotten the job but I guess we can't always get everything :P Thanks, as this was written a year ago I have improved a lot, but I will definitely think about changing it!

Thanks for a great review!

-Kiana


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