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Review:HomeAtHogwarts says:
Hi, I'm rereading this story and just caught the heart-breaking phrase from Laura to Mary (about Bea)"I swear she'll be the death of me." :'(

I really love your story and style of writing, you're to blame for at least a days worth of procrastination from exams! I agree that you had to end the story like that, but am so glad that you published those 'behind the scenes' chapters.

There was one thing that caught my mind (this is the wrong place and a few years too late to point it out) but when Sirius and Laura are in the forest you mentioned they were surrounded by crocuses but it was after Easter break. Even in Scotland (where I live) the crocuses are gone by then, daffodils or early bluebells you could get away with though.
Thank you so much (although if I fail my exams, I know who to blame...)

Author's Response: Yeah, I love that line too. Sorry!! *smiles wickedly*

And I'm very sorry I took you from your exam revision - I hope you passed!

Thanks for the comment about crocuses - I'll have to edit that. I think I thought it would be okay because (and memory is a little hazy here) in the original books they were out at about that time, but if you live there you certainly know what's flowering and what's not. Thanks for the tip!

cheers Mel

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