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Review:marauderfan says:
This is a great one-shot. The little glimpses into Lily's history with sacrificing herself were sweet, but what really makes the story shine is the part where Lily is 18. Her sheer determination, and insistence that if she gives her all to the war, that they will win - I just really loved that section, it's so sad in Lily's naivety (and arrogance - she is quite suited to James after all :P ) but her hope is so powerful. I don't know, I just really love the tone of that section, because it's clear that this is almost the end for her, and she's so sure it will be all right just because she's got so much confidence. Ah, it's so sad - like she knows of the danger, but refuses to admit it to herself because then she'll actually have to stop to consider how dangerous and scary everything is and she doesn't even want to think it. (Gah, I don't even know if I'm making sense anymore, I just loved it.)

And then of course the last section, her with Harry - the whole beginning of the story adds so much depth to the Lily who stood there before Voldemort and sacrificed herself. The bit about Harry's hand was so poignant :(

Wonderful job with this fic Kayla! ♥

Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you so much, Kristin! ♥ ♥

I admit I didn't think this was my best work but hearing all your lovely comments I just djdjkbjdbgkvj ♥

Thank you so much for this lovely review and for nominating me and for voting!!! Ahhh it means so much to me, thank you, thank you, thank you! ♥ ♥


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