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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi again! :)

I don't think this chapter was boring at all! Something I'm really enjoying about this story is getting to know Victoire and how she handles those stressful, everyday situations, like a bratty brother or catching a cold. It did a really good job of establishing her daily life and the relationships she has with people around her. I liked hearing all the descriptions of Victoire's ordeal as she got sick and dealt with it. It's also great to see the difficulties of the move and its challenges, like how Victoire has to sell the flat quickly, and how that decision involves both the wizarding and Muggle market.

Emmaline is so funny! Her obsession with pushing crumbs in the floor made me laugh because it was one of those weird and seemingly pointless things that kids do. And Robert! At first I thought he might be a ghost or something magical and sinister, but either way he seems quite funny. I loved Teddy's comments about Robert and not being good enough for Emmaline, haha. He just seems like such a great dad in how he's both responsible and mature, but has a silly, youthful side, and he and Victoire are just so adorable in how he takes care of her and doesn't care what she looks like - just perfect. ♥

Honestly it didn't even occur to me that she might be pregnant! :P I'm not sure if I'd want her to be at this point - of course it would be lovely to have another little Lupin-Weasley baby, but at the same time she's going through a big move and establishing herself at a demanding new job in a different country, and doesn't really have the time right now. But we shall see!

Oh, and going back to the beginning, I found the insight into the family dynamics very interesting as well. I'm looking forward to meeting Fleur in this story and how she is personified, as well as Dominique and how she is so perfect, and what kind of relationship Victoire has with her.

Another wonderful chapter! :)

Author's Response: Woohoo for not being boring! :D

I just really wanted to focus on a lot of detail for this story. I wanted to make it as ordinary and yet beautiful as possible. When I got the challenge of the Modern Romance, I was super excited to do it, and make it as ordinary as possible. I think so many people have so many ideals on what they think love is, that they forget even these simple things show how much someone cares and loves one another! (I'm also a HUGE fan of "The Office" so I had to get a flare of that style in here!)

Teddy is my daddy in a younger form! :D I'm a big daddy's girl, so Teddy here is so fun for me to write and so fun to see people's reactions to him! I mean obviously he does things my Muggle father could never do, but that relationship with Emmaline is what gets me every time. Easily my first favorite relationship in the story since I'm such a daddy's girl! haha

I like the way you think ;)

I'm excited to show that side of the family, I really am! I hope I haven't waited too long that you're not interested any more! Either way, though, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's making my whole day over here, dear! :D You're the best!

~Mae


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