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Review:HogwartsAlum says:
Ok so it took me a week but I have finally gotten to this point in your story since starting the last story leading to this one. Only criticism I can think of is with Voldemort. You have made him younger then he actually is and for some reason and maybe it is just the way I am interpreting this but is seems like he is weaker then he actually is. It might be because he is hardly mentioned but as Voldemort is one of the most accomplished legilimens, I find it hard to believe the girls can fool him as easily as they have. But it is your story and I cant wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Yes, I have made Voldemort younger by putting him only a few years older than Aunt Petunia... but that is one of many liberties I've taken. I also had to make Luna older, change Lupin's origin story and a few things in Draco's past as well. Though I don't have anything at all really planned out and write chapter by chapter with the hope of tying everything together, I do actually have an idea of what I want to do with Voldemort... which may be why he hasn't shown up as much as he probably should have- yet. :) After reading your review and thinking on what's already happened in the story, I've realized that I wound up giving the backstory of the idea I want to put in place for Voldemort rather than actually have him be present in the story. That's why the focus is more on the psychics and humanoids on the enemy side rather than him. I already have decided I need a third story as this one is crazy long, and in that one, the main focus past the good guys will be the rise of Voldemort and his reaction to Elise and Harry's different sides of the war. Thanks for reading, I hope I addressed your review and if not, feel free to either leave another or post on my author wall in the forums :)

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