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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) I'm here for the Slytherin Review Exchange. I was super excited to be assigned to you (well, I did the assignments technically, but I was pleased when it worked out that I got to review you) as I've wanted to come and catch up on this story for a while.

Ahh, so she's going to Paris?! :D Actually the Eiffel tower on the banner was a pretty good clue. This is so exciting, and Victoire is a perfect candidate since she knows French and her family is there. I was so nervous through the chapter about how Teddy might react, but then he was so excited! I'm really curious to see how they'll make the long distance from Paris work, and what sort of adventures might await there.

I'm really happy Van is going as well as she's such a dynamic and fun character, and I really enjoy the comfortable, slightly goofy friendship between her and Victoire. It was quite cool how she just wanders in and out of Victoire's fireplace and helps herself to biscuits, and how it does seem like Van has a bit of a crush on Victoire - or at least likes to joke about having one - and the fresh dynamic that adds to their friendship. I was giggling with the banter about the cats (poor Mozart!) and how Victoire secretly was looking at her tea leaves. That was such an interesting detail and showed how though she's a very rational and intelligent person she has some superstitious habits. Lots of people are like that with things such as knocking wood for luck or crossing their fingers - I do that all the time - so it reminded me of how relatable Victoire is.

Another really cool detail was all the information about Emmaline's toys and I have to admit I was a little jealous. Especially of the flying Quidditch player action figures - those are so cool! And it makes sense they would be marketed to kids after the animated Quidditch players which were souvenirs at the World Cup in GoF. I really loved all the details here and how they created this normal life which is enhanced by magic.

Victoire and Teddy are just adorable! The detail about thinking she might give birth to a dolphin and the bologna and Nutella was just really funny and cute. I like how undramatic and ordinary their lives are, but with that spark of magic and adventure which makes the story so vibrant. Great job with this! :)

Author's Response: LuLu! Can I just apologize now that I never got the chance to actually do the assignment on your side! D: I felt so bad when I never got to get to the challenge, so I hope you don't resent having read this whole whopper of a story so far!

Anyway. I'll put my guilt to the side for now and answer the reviews! (Also, you're the sweetest thing ever! You looked forward to the story and being assigned to me? :3 You're an idol, so that makes my life!) :D

Haha! Yep! Paris! :D I'm excited but nervous to get that far, but I hope it all goes for the best! I've continued this a bit on my spare time, and I like what I've seen so far ;). As for Teddy, I will say that the initial challenge was for a modern love relationship that actually works, so I'll have to see how it goes from here since the challenge is technically no longer in affect. :)

I LOVE Van! :D And I love her friendship with Victoire! Basically, it is my relationship with my best friend (only neither of us are actually lesbian, it's a pretty close relationship haha) so adding her here is just so easy for me! I love her so dearly! Also, I'm glad you love the detail there! I like adding those bits here and there just for some realism, which I'm sure any writer does, but it's nice to see that it is noticed! :D

You make me grin ear-to-ear, dear! You're just gushing and it makes me gush! I'm just so elated that you love this and actually see and pay attention to all these lovely little details I add in here. It gives me hope that I'm doing something right in there! Thank you so much! For reading, and reviewing! Again, I do apologize for not being able to get to the assignment when the time was here, but I do promise to make it up to you someday! I love your writing and stories! Like I said, you're one of my idols! :D

Much love!

~Mae


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