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Review:Charlene says:
You had me worried there . She has way too many things on her plate to get pregnant yet. I liked that you made Australia out to be the team that would lose but then they went batsh*t crazy and beat England :) it was refreshing to see the country of the characters didn't win... You know what I mean right ? Anyway great story! Sorry I haven't reviewed before-was too busy reading your amazing story ! Keep up the good work :D . I'll have you know, I was at first skeptical of a story with Lily as the protagonist ( I'm not sure why) I guess I just read a lot of storys with either Al or James as the protagonist, or Rose. But I've got to say, I think your doing all the characters proud and also giving the story a good dose of reality . Thanks for writing !

Author's Response: Yeah, she did! But I put that in there because she is in an adult relationship and accidental pregnancies are a part of that.

Hehe, I was always going to make England lose but I didn't know who to and then I wanted to add some good ol' Australian stereotyping so I thought I'd favour my home country, hahaha :p

Yeah, I know a lot of fanfictions have Al, Rose, and James so I thought I'd do one with Lily. I love reading stories about her and I've always been so interested in her!

But thank you so much for this lovely review! You're just so kind! ♥

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