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Review:800 words of heaven says:
In the last review, I didn't talk much about your actual writing but I think it's very good. There are only a few spelling and grammar mistakes, which I think are more typos than anything else. Your description is lovely. It's enough to paint the scene without bogging down the prose, and your dialogue is quite natural as well.

Faye seems to be coming along well as a character. She's quite reserved at the moment, but I think that's to be expected. I'm sure she'll be "blossoming" soon. And I cannot wait for Dom to initiate her dastardly plan!

Author's Response: Thank you. I really wish I could edit everything to perfection but by the time I'm posting, I've read everything so many times that my eyes are crossing.

A secondary title could be "The Unraveling of Faye Moncrieff" so I'm glad she's intriguing so far.

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