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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Hello! *waves*

Oh, my goodness! This is such a fantastic start! I already love Dominique as a character already. I wouldn't want her as a friend, but from an interesting character standpoint, she's very intriguing so far. Right now, she's walking the line between fanon and your own twist on her, which I really like. There's enough there for the readers who feel comfortable reading typical characterisation, but also enough to keep things interesting. I love that she's quite unapologetic about how and why she makes friends. I think it'll be very interesting to see her throughout the story.

And Louis is her twin, rather than her younger brother. That's a refreshing change! He seems to be a nice foil to Dominique at the moment. He's quiet, where she's loud; he's empathetic, where she's well, not. Hopefully he'll come into his own as the story moves on, rather than just being secondary to Dominique all the time.

Moving on to chapter two!

Author's Response: I quite like her but I'm like you where I don't think I'd want to hang out with her. She's fun to write because I think of her as largely delusional and living in a completely different world from the rest of us mere mortals.

Yeah, I usually write him younger but Dom is so outrageous that I think she needs that immediate restraint. Louis brings her back to earth.


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