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Review:potterfan310 says:

Are you trying to break my heart? Man this story is just full of feels.

I loved 'In Love With Your Laugh' and I'm super glad you wrote more Evalin/James. I just had to listen to the songs you used and my heart broke a little more, they're so beautiful and I cried once again.

James' devotion to her is just... I can't find the words but it shows his true love for her and I think it reflects part of what he said when he was proposing to her as well. He well and truly loves her and you can see it so much.

"if I had chosen a different name. Would you still be here if I had chosen a different name?" - This hit me so much, because I relate to it in a way but for different reasons. There's always that doubt, that what if I had... It's horrible because things happen and your powerless to stop it yet you try and come up with a reason as to why it happened.

Yet again you've reduced me to tears by one of your stories. It's such a heartbreaking story but you've written it beautifully ♥

Evalin standing outside the nursery, it's horrible having to clean or go through a person's house when they've passed but to have to do it to a little nursery is overwhelming

I love the fact Evalin goes outside and finds comfort in lying down in the dew covered grass. Before looking up at star, wondering if her baby girl is up. I myself find myself doing the same, wondering if my loved ones are up there shining down on me.

Naming her after Ginny shows just how close her and Evalin are

I think the ending where James finds her and they unite is just perfect. They need one another and whilst Evalin may be unsure, they are both grieving parents who have three things: the memory of their little one, the love for one another and hope. ♥

I love this, it truly is beautiful and heart felt and you've done a fab job of writing it ♥

Soph x

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm sorry. ♥

I just, how do you even reply to a review like this? I just don't even have words. Soph you're so sweet to me and so nice, and I'm so glad that this story touched you. There will be more of James and Evalin to come, and they'll be much happier! I promise!

I'm sorry for reducing you to tears, but it kind of makes me happy because I know I was successful in my writing. ♥

I'm glad you loved this, and I'm glad it touched you and I'm sorry I took so long to reply and that my reply is so lame. I just don't know HOW to reply. This is just. ♥

Thank you ♥

xoxo Sarah ♥

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