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Review:Court says:
It was a great celebration party and fun to see so many different characters there. I'm excited you are writing a sequel as I am very interested to see what happens with Brigid/Freddie, Lily, Maddie, etc. I have to admit at this point I'm more interested in the secondary characters that the James/Carlotta relationship so I'm hoping they get a lot of time in the sequel. It will be interesting to see how Freddie turns his life around and what that will mean for him and Brigid. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: It was difficult to write this chapter without it coming across as me going through and ticking all the boxes (because that's exactly what this chapter was planned to be - an exercise in tying up plot threads here and there). I'm pleased with how it turned out in the end, and also that you liked it too. :)

Ah, the sequel. Brigid and Freddie, and indeed Brigid/Freddie, will get a lot of page time, including a fair bit of emotional digging. As for Lily and Maddie, they manage to wade their way into places they're not supposed to be, so they'll definitely feature. The sequel is more of a wider project than Off the Rails - this is primarily about James, whereas Derailed's main plot will be a much bigger thing. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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