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Review:prankingthemarauders says:
I'm loving your stories Lauren, I really am :)

Firstly, I'd just like to say a HUGE congrats to you for writing in second person! I know not many authors attempt to write it but I think you've done it justice in your one-shot :)

OH MY GOODNESS THE FEELS! In the beginning you turned me into a blubbering mess, just reading how sad George was after Fred's death was so heartbreaking :(

But then when Fred appears...I actually thought that Fred was alive (just goes to show I'm as thick as Ron ey?) I think you've done the banter between the twins extremely well, it fits right in with what I expected!

Having them talk about all the people who were attending Fred's funeral was also a nice touch. I couldn't help but burst out laughing with the following line "Well grease my hair and call me Snape", it seemed like a very Fred thing to say :)

The line which really summed up the story for me was: "You don't want to be ok, you just want him back." Such an accurate depiction of George's feelings, so props to you!

Another amazing one-shot Lauren, cheers for the great read!

Tam :)

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