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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Okay. I've already said this, but I'll say this again. I'm in love with this chapter.

I'm in love with how gentle and loving and motherly Mrs. Potter is. I'm in love with how giving she is, and how she's trying so hard to be that mother figure for Rainne. I love that Rainne LETS Mrs. Potter do all of that. It's so wonderful to read, and feel, and just ugh. I love it.

I also loved the way that Mrs. Potter made Raine eat. You go MRS. P! Anyways Lily and Rainne exchanging gifts was so cute. I just wanted to snuggle both of them, like ugh. So perfect. I'm kind of crying at that ending. I know you said you were worried about it, but I think that you ended this chapter so perfectly. Like, I don't want the story to end, but if it had to end here, I'd be okay with that. You know?

I love that things seem to kind of be looking up for Rainne. She's found a new family, people who are supportive and there for her, people who she can call family. I love that. It's perfect. I'm terrified for the ball, but right now. I just love this.

Oh and that scene with Sirius, Rainne and Ben. Crying.

xoxo ♥

P.S. When I read the song lyrics about cough syrup I could actually taste cough syrup. Yuck.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it. Lately for some reason I've been really worried that everything is super rushed and bad so I love that you love it. It makes me worry less.

Mrs. Potter is seriously my fave. I kind of write her like my mom which also makes me sad because it makes me miss her. But it makes me feel like I'm with her. Oh god I'm making it sound like my mom is dead. She's not. She just lives in Spain LOL. But anyway. Mrs. P is awesome. She's so intuitive.

So it's okay if Rainne stays with Ben then? No Sirianne? I don't believe you :P But I know what you mean, with just having Rainne feel this way about her 'family' and feeling at peace with them.

I had to add some humor into it! Can't have a completely serious chapter. :P

Thanks love!

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