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Review:AlexFan says:
Kiana, you have an amazing knack for writing, no matter what character or genre it is. It's hard to believe that you haven't written something about Sirius before because this was really great.

I liked how you used the Coldplay lyrics to break up the story. I've seen people use lyrics in their stories quite but they've never really worked quite as well as they do here. They don't interrupt the story, they just help the scene change.

I liked how you added in the fact that Sirius kept count of how many days he had been imprisoned and for how long James and Lily had been dead. It seems like something that Sirius would do. My favourite thing however had to be the fact that Sirius used his innocence to keep himself from going insane because of the dementors. Throughout this entire one-shot I actually got the feeling that Sirius was actually bored and was just waiting for his chance to bust out of Azkaban.

(I'm sorry my review isn't long and poetic like everyone else's.)

Anyhoo, I really did enjoy this and I think you did an awesome job on the one-shot!

Author's Response: Haha, I wrote Marauders Sirius before but that was written so badly I discount it, but thank you for the wonderful compliments Grace!

I'm so glad that you thought they worked with the flow of the story. That's why I've always been so apprehensive about songfics as I always assume they'll jolt the flow but it worked here for some reason.

I know, it's sort of worry how well that matches Sirius as it tells us a lot about his mental stability, but oh well :P I'm glad you got the feeling of boredom as I tried to have it deep down there as he just wanted this fight with the others, to be able to have it out and show that he was innocent and it's a weird twist for him.

Thank you for this amazing review, and don't worry about the length or whether it was poetic or not, I loved it!

-Kiana


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