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Review:theblacksisters says:
Ack! I'm so sorry for leaving a review this late. My only excuse: I was away for a while and didn't realize another chapter was up! (silly me).
Anyway, this chapter was really sad. Draco talking to the supposedly dead Harry was so sad. :'(. The idea of Ginny blocking out memories from her mind was an interesting one - if I had that kind of memory, I'd definitely not want to remember it.
I did notice a couple of minor mistakes in the conventions - I believe you misspelled 'Legilimency' when Remus was talking about it to Ginny. Also, '" . . . agree to do it." he answered immediately.' it seems you accidently put a period instead of a comma directly after 'it.' Finally, 'purple' was capitalized at the end of the chapter, when it was describing Albus Dumbledore.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm really looking forward to hearing what happened to Tom Riddle now that he isn't Voldemort, and even more interested after you brought him onto the scene a few chapters ago. Keep writing and have the next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Hi there, TBS

Don't even worry about reviewing late, I've also been away for a while, so I didn't even notice, I was just so happy to have another review from you.

The chapter was really sad to write - I caught myself tearing up at least three times - and I knew what was going to happen!! (Silly me!)

I'll get straight to fixing these mistakes as soon as I'm done with the story - at most one more chapter and then an epilogue, in which I plan to fully explain Tom Riddle and all he entailed in the universe that is Contradiction.

My next chapter is in the queue, so it should be up real soon.

As always, I value your opinion greatly and really appreciate your amazing reviews!

Hope to hear from you soon,
*FenrirGreyback


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