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Review:LiveBreatheNeedHP says:
This is really cool. I was a bit sceptical about reading it and wasn't sure whether I would like it but I really enjoyed this chapter. I really love your take on the characters so far, I think it's really cool and I think it will continue to work well.
The chapter was good, but you kinda missed the Sorting Ceremony and I think Peter may have overreacted a little to his friends stealing his food. But maybe that's just his character.
Sorry if that all sounded repetitive. Anyway, I really enjoyed the chapter overall.

Author's Response: Oh hurray, a review!

I'm glad you liked the chapter and you do bring up a really good point - this fic jumps around a lot so scenes like the Sorting Ceremony aren't always there. But since there are so many POV switches in group chapters, I sometimes have to skip things to make the chapter flow realistically. And yes, that is just Peter's character. I write him a little differently than most XD

Your review was not repetitive, thanks for so much for leaving me one!!

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