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Review:KF says:
OH! Yes. My best friend is actually an online counselor that helps teenagers (particularly teenage girls) with their insecurities and teaches them how to face them and themselves properly. What you've written Draco to do for Lavender to help her develop her self concept and positive feelings towards herself is completely genius. That's what you're supposed to do with someone like that. You give them opportunities. You show them how they can build their love and appreciation for themselves in a positive environment. This was incredibly well done.

Also! Yes! The crypticness! I love how you're totally alluding that their relationship is like a puzzle that only they can decipher. I can't do it. So many beautiful metaphors in this. Can't wait to see what both of their puzzles turn out to be. Oh my god.

Onto 14. Should be working right now but I can't. It's like an addiction.

Author's Response: KF,

A counselor friend? That is really commendable work. I am certainly NOT trained on anything of the kind. To me, Lavender's insecurities were obvious in the movies and it just made sense to try to have her feel "less invisible" by giving her such a huge involved role. Thank you so very much for commenting on this piece of storyline.

And yes, these two are a puzzle, indeed. A large, grueling, difficult, complicated puzzle!

Addiction? Quite the positive addiction, I think. :D

Thank you again, KF. You've been amazing!

Dark Whisper

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