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Review:KF says:
It's almost as if I'm watching a film at this point. I love how easily their chemistry flows. THIS is what I'm talking about. It's all cerebral - wit, pride, maintaining the upper hand, and a sense of control over the situation. Him being her intellectual and scholastic match was a very lovely decision to make - considering one of her pitfalls is that she loves to be the best at everything she tries. I wonder if this will make them grow playfully competitive?

Can't wait to see how that turns out. The darker aspect of the attraction is beautiful as well. I'm just wondering what else is going to bind them together other than understanding loneliness. There needs to be more weight there, imo, to help me see what else is going to anchor their relationship (even though its platonic at the moment). It's still in it's early stages though so I'm anxious to see how well you flesh them out in later chapters.

More 10s for you darling. Onto Lucky/Unlucky maybe? - 13!

Author's Response: KF,

Watching like a film? That is a wonderful compliment and must be like for some readers, as I've heard similar things in other reviews. :) Thank you!

You don't know what your comments on being "cerebral - wit, pride..." mean to me. I really wanted this story to be in-depth, easy to read, but their relationship to become complicated. That is the goal, anyway.

Yes, their relationship is in the baby stages and there is much more to come that will have them falling hard for each other.

You are so very generous once again with your 10's! Thank you!

Much appreciation,
Dark Whisper


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