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Review:KF says:
And this is the scene where the eels throw Ariel and Eric off of the boat - so close! Yet so far! Lol. I was surprised that he had been so open with her in this chapter and how willing she was to be vulnerable with him, as in letting him isolate her so easily. I think that there's been a steady build up to this so I think that it's good. It was almost on verge of being a bit too fast but I like that the story was designed to hold all of it back. She needs more time to get to know him and examine her own feelings.

I thought that the cave was a really inventive idea. I would have never expected it. I saw the title of these chapters and I was just thinking, "What the _ is this?" - out of curiosity of course! I like that you're implementing a fairy tale aspect into this as well. It gives the story its own signature and it makes it more romantic and complex. I really like this idea :)

Moving onto 12. Dying to see how they are around the house elves. Absolutely DYING.

Author's Response: KF,

Ariel and Eric? Hahaha! Trust me, there will be no 'breaking into song' in this fic. Lots of solemn and sad, tears and longing are to come for these two. ;)

This is a steady, very slow burn. No fluff either.

Romantic and complex... these are the compliments straight to my heart!

Thank you, sincerely,
Dark Whisper

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