Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:KF says:
Once again, my over identification with these characters spills into these chapters!

What I love is that you've highlighted is Hermione's natural independence. Not a bad thing at all but to needier partners that require one sidedness in a relationship, this can be a problem. It sort of reminds me of me side eyeing Ron's tactics to be "nicer" to Hermione during the first half of DH. He needed to rely on an instructional, "pick up artist" style manual in order to give her basic attention and affection even though he's allegedly starved of it in a relationship setting. I love Ron but I enjoy that you've explored the side of their relationship that shows that there would be obvious conflict over his lack of tact in the emotional arena combined with his neediness to gloss over his insecurities.

Hermione's insult at him that you've written is actually quite accurate as far as I'm concerned - him getting back with Lavender after feeling 'rejected' by Hermione is a total sign that at that stage in his life he just needed someone to pay attention to him to curb his jealousy and envy of other people. I don't think him being the 6th child in the Weasley family to an over expectant mother helped any (performance anxiety and all) but I feel as if many of his problems were self inflicted. Sometimes I sympathize but other times I feel as if he needs at least half a decade to himself to grow as a character.

What's going to be interesting is how Draco's and Hermione's mutual compartmentalization mixes together. They both compartmentalize and push their emotions down in fear of being openly vulnerable in case they want to strike down someone that's hurt them.

Oh I can't wait. I shouldn't read all of this in one day but I want to and I hate myself for it. Moving onto chapter 7!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 580
Submit Report: