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Review:KF says:
I love the amount of complexity you've stuffed into this story so far. Honestly this is the reason why I try to find longer stories on this website (especially ones with longer chapters like yours) because it feels as though I'm thrusted into a completely different world.

I wanted to review this after I finished your most recent chapter but I couldn't hold it in. Couldn't do it.

The fact that you're weaving a history of Draco developing complex ptsd is very very well thought of. I also like how complex his relationship is with his parents. It isn't entirely black and white because it's a direct reflection on his own actions and feelings about himself. It's quite beautiful really.

What I find interesting though is that you haven't gone down the road (so far, you may in later chapters I have yet to read) to expand on his torn feelings about being forced to serve Voldemort. However I'm guessing here..that you have in chapters to come but this may be an example of Draco maintaining control by compartmentalizing his emotions because he's been conditioned to and because it gives him a personal feeling of security.

Oh if only I could find more stories that pay this much attention to detail with Draco. If only.

Moving onto chapter 6!

Author's Response: KF,
Complexity? Indeed. This entire story is a complex weave of "a story within a story." At this point, it is early to tell much of anything, but this chapter is a bit of backstory into the Malfoys. It is just bad enough, but not terrible. I think this allows them to still be close, but very flawed.

Yes, compartmentalizing helps him deal with what is happening (or better, what will be happening) for coping and like you mentioned, a personal sense of security.

Oh, I do love Draco and this story really dives into who he really is. Thank you so much for putting this story into 'his genre' for lack of better description. :)

Thank you for so many wonderful reviews. I am only sorry that I haven't responded sooner. My apologies.

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper


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