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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi, hi, hi!!

I could not agree more with Coral, lol :p Exercise is torture. Coral and her brother are cute despite their arguing, ahh sibling love.

Nathan is a cutie.

Louis and Nell breaking makes me sad as does Coral arguing with Nell. Don't worry be happy ♥

Albus ♥ Ahh the bad boy has returned :D

YES! I love that there is so much Albus/Coral interaction and despite everything Albus is just rolling with it. At least he's coming outof his shell. Albus and Coral talking to Louis! I love that they're working together to try and help their friend and cousin.

"using her soft (really, itís the softest thing youíll find), rubbing her blonde hair dry." - Haha, I think you've maybe missed the world 'towel' out.

Aww but things were going so well. Oh Albus *sighs*

I can't wait for the next one!

Soph x

Author's Response: Nathan is adorable, isn't he? :3

Albus/Coral interaction? Can I get a hell yeah please? n_n

Oh! Thank you so much for pointing that out, i'll get around fixing is as soon as i can! :)

Aww, I know. Ah, Albus. What do we do?

I'm glad you're excited because the next chapter should be up soon!

Thank you so much for the lovely review xx

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