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Review:HEG says:
Hi!

At first, I wasn't sure what was really going on. It all became clear to me when Hagrid was taken away because he's a half giant and he's teaching at Hogwarts. I think it's quite unfair that he doesn't have a say in the matter because, none of it was his fault. It was all Voldemort's.

I think you're very good at writing and you have a nice balance of dialogue and description. I can't really find a fault with it so it really is amazing for your first one shot.

I tink you've portaryed Harry's anger excellently in the scene where he was arguing with Doge but for me, the nding was the highlight. A nice read and very well written.

HEG

Author's Response: Hi, there!

There were obviously lots of loose ends left over from the books, but I always felt like Hagrid's story was especially untidy. He was expelled based on lies that were exposed for all to see in book #2. It only seemed logical to me that he would want to clear his name -- or his friends would want to clear it for him -- after the war was over.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.


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