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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

Ah, this was such a lovely fic to read! I just finished reading Kayla's version of this story, and I really loved how well the two stories connected! I'm really impressed by how well the scenarios match, particularly with the dialogue (which is written really well by the way) - I felt like everything just flowed so well and smoothly. It was so interesting reading about the moment from Lily's perspective, and I felt like you really did her justice in her characterisation. I found it really realistic that Lily would be so aware of all of James' habits and really know him and read him so well. I also loved how Lily was so considerate - going to the Three Broomsticks despite it not really being her cup of tea, and also not teasing James after the spilt drink. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this, and I think you did a lovely job writing it! :)

- Charlotte
(for the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza)

Author's Response: Hi Charlotte! Thanks so much for the review! I'm so sorry it took so long for me to respond to it. But I appreciate your kind words so much! I had never really written anything like this before, and definitely not for a writing duo challenge. So it was a really fun experience. Kayla and I compared notes on the dialogue so it would match :) And I'm so glad you liked Lily! I thought she would be a really observant person, and it was obvious from the books that she really cared about James. I wanted to bring those qualities together in a fluffy way, and I'm really happy you enjoyed the result :) Thanks again!

--Maggie



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