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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi Leonore!

This was once again, another fabulous story of yours! I love how you've described the hospital environment, and made it such that Bode is able to comprehend and have thoughts, but unable to move or speak. It really put the entire scenario into a new perspective and I think that was amazing.

Your writing is so poetic. I don't know what it is, but everything just flows so seamlessly to form a beautifully knit story.

Poor Bode! He realizes what had happened right when the Devil's Snare grips him! :( Stupid healers. I never really understood (when I read the book) why anyone would keep Devils Snare on the bedside table without checking it first. Don't they cast some identification spells or the such? It's horrible!

Anyway, wonderful story, and good luck with the challenge!


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Author's Response: Hello Erin!

Thank you so much; I do love your reviews. Poetic? Yep, tricked the validators again! 3 line rule? Nah... ;) This flow just comes naturally to me - if it doesn't sound right in my head, I'm not happy with it. I use online thesaurus to find the perfect word if I can't remember it - like I have this feeling there is one, but it's lurking in an inaccessible corner of my mind. Every word has to be just right (you can tell I'm a 'Claw!) I do actually make up poetry in my head a lot.

Poor Bode indeed! Most of my stories are really complimentary about the healers, but Broderick's suffering the other side. It isn't their fault that they don't know he's fine inside, but I think JK said that they were rushed at Christmas so failed to follow he usual precautions. It was one of those small short-cuts with disastrous consequences which you read about happening in our own hospitals far too often.

Thank you!
- Leonore

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