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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Next chapter is the last chapter. I think I thought it was this one. I'm glad it's not. It's kind of bittersweet, though.

I love that with Rose being pregnant, Scorpius has picked up so much more work, and it's supporting them so well. That's exciting and awesome, and yay! Things are working out! I love when things work out! Bored, pregnant Rose sounds slightly terrifying. I wouldn't want to be the one locked up alone in a house with her. I think it's funny that all of the Weasley women just blurt out whatever they're thinking when they're pregnant. My friend was like that, it was madness.

Hahaha, probably guilt. Rose is sassy and I love it. I love that Scorpius loves it. I love all of this. I'm in love with the way you've written your characters in this chapter. I like seeing both of their characters grow and develop as these chapters go on. It's really fun and enjoyable. I also love that Rose doesn't want to know what the gender of the baby is, as long as there is one. That's brilliant. Also that Scorpius was relieved when he found out it wouldn't be twins. That was probably the best moment.

OH MY GOD SHE SLAPPED HIM. Haha, this gets better and better and better. "It's supposed to be my job to get all freaked out. You're the responsible one." that was priceless. I definitely thought Rose would be more freaked out. It's great that Scorp snapped right back after that. Go him! Awe. Haha, he fainted. I say haha a lot, I feel like I don't have enough words to express how much I'm enjoying this story. I also feel like all of these reviews are entirely blabbery and confusing. I'm so sorry.

xoxo Sarah ♥
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Author's Response: It's good that he's able to support them at this point, cause they actually have been evicted before for not being able to pay the rent. ;)

Rose is happy either way, so long as there's only one baby. She's heard way too many twins stories from her family! haha. Rose is very sassy, and yeah, bored and pregnant is terrifying.

Honestly, by the time you're at the end of the pregnancy, you don't even care anymore. You just want the baby/babies OUT, so freaking out isn't necessary. Not for everyone, but it's definitely how I felt. Reversing their usual roles there was fun though - normally Rose would be the one to freak out while Scorpius remained calm.

Not blabby or confusing at all! You're fine. I love reading your reviews.


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