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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hahaha, I love how self-centered Dominique is. It's so perfect. Oh, right, Hi again. :) Not that you're surprised to have a review from at at this point, I suppose.

I love that Roxanne is a writer and hasn't sold any books, but Dom writes an angry vengeance book and she sells her book. Poor Rox, good for Dom (I guess, I mean, I'd rather root for Rox, I think.) Sometimes it was hard being related to her. We all have that one relative, and I love this line because it was so relatable and I felt like it just jumped out and really spoke to me. I know that feeling. I like how you've put "She was good at that. She should've been a politician" in two stories from two different peoples point of views about two different people for two similar reasons. It shows how families tend to think alike, and I feel like it's almost like a signature in a way. Even if it wasn't intentional.

Poor Rose, being forced to stay sober. I love that you used Designated Apparator. Can I use that? It's absolutely brilliant! Yay! Molly! Haha, I love the boys, this is so great. I feel like this is actually quite similar to some of the parties that my family throws. I'm absolutely loving it so far!! Oh lord, she's evil. I'll call their mums to come fetch them later. I like the way Rose thinks. I love love love that Molly and Rose aren't super distant from each other, too. It's fantastic!! I love all of these touches to the story!

Oooh. Morning sickness? Is Rose pregnant?!?! I love that that's what I first jump to. I hope I'm right. Maybe if she is, Vic will spot it now. I love that Rose doesn't want to hold a kid, either. C'mon Rose, buck up. It's not that bad. Victoire the mother. Who would've thought?? HAHAHA. OH MY GOSH. The comparison between Remus and Johnny. I might cry laughing.

YES. I WAS RIGHT. HEHEHEHEHE. Yay! Rose is gonna has a baby!!! I'm afraid this is going to take a sad twist. I hope it won't. Haha, are babies contagious. So funny. So so so funny. Oh Rose. YAY! I'm so excited about this. I'm in love with Roses reaction, and Scorpius'. I wish she was more enthusiastic, though!!! STOP ENDING CHAPTERS SO PERFECTLY!!! They're so cute. Can I be them?

xoxo Sarah ♥
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Author's Response: It is totally fitting for how things work out for Dominique that she wrote a book and it becomes a best-seller, while Roxanne has been paying her writer's dues, so to speak, and getting nowhere really. Dominique lands on her feet, no matter what happens. Husband leaves her? Makes herself a best-seller off it. First marriage falls apart? Gets a better husband the second time around. It's her. And she's pretentious and self-centered. It kind of cracks me up. She's just one of those people.

I totally didn't intend that, but yeah let's say I did it on purpose to show Rose and Molly's thought patterns in common. Yup. haha.

Yes, use Designated Apparators! I absolutely think that would be insane to try Apparating when drunk, so much like you pick a designated driver, you pick someone to get you home safely in the wizarding world as well. And the boys are fun. I love writing James and Fred. They're complete idiots.

Yes, morning sickness! And Johnny Lupin is insane. He's a lot like Rose, she just never really sees it. They got the crazy gene that Fred & George had, for sure.

No sad twists in this. Just fluffy goodness ;) Thank you for reviewing!


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