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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Ooh. Scorpius' point of view. I like that this switches every other. Fun fun fun. I hope he talks Rose into marriage.

First paragraph and I'm already snickering. You're a brilliant writer. I love the way Scorpius thinks and describes things compared to Rose. I can see how they fit each other so well, yet how they are so individually their own person. Oh my gosh. I'm laughing at those outfits. Talk about eccentric. That was just so priceless. I can't even handle how ridiculous that whole ordeal was. Poor Scorpius. My eyes would hurt trying to sketch that. Let alone doing it for four hours and scheduling ANOTHER sitting for a later date. Merlin save him.

Okay, I'm intrigued. What does Rose do with her days that she has singed hair and has to hide bruises and try to heal cuts? And give him a smile that he knows means she did something he didn't want her to do. They're so cute together. Ugh. I want a romance like Rose and Scorpius. Maybe I shouldn't say that this early into the story...

"Rose looked as if she very much wanted to miss it, but Scorpius made her go. Family was important, even when they were mental." I am relating to Rose quite a bit in this story. There has never been a truer line than this one. Interesting that Dom wasn't there, was she watching the kids? That would make sense. Wow, 5, that's crazy. Teddy is hilarious. Hahahaha, Fleur. I can't. You're hilarious.

Oh no. Scorp has baby fever. I get the remote feeling that Scorpius holding the baby was a bad idea. Though if William had the same effect on Rose then maybe it'd be a good idea. Rose should hold the baby! I love how both Scorpius and Rose thought/said He'll look like a Weasley soon enough. Weasley traits always prevail, I assume :P . Onto the next chapter! Yay!

xoxo Sarah ♥
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Author's Response: I normally write only from Rose's POV, so having Scorpius as a POV character (so to speak) was fun to write in this. A nice change-up to show his perspective. He's much less wacky than Rose is.

Ah Rose's job. Well, there are two novel-length stories before this one that explain that (Just Another Midnight Run, and A Weirder Shade of Midnight. Then Midnight Over Broadway is after this story.), but Rose is a bounty hunter. That is purely artistic license on my part, because those don't exist in England, but since the wizardng world is archaic in a lot of ways, and I really wanted to write it, I went with it.

Teddy and Victoire have a LOT of kids, yes. And yeah, Dominique was babysitting their other kids. Someone has to keep an eye on Johnny! I like Fleur's cameos in these stories. I have a good time writing her. And Teddy Lupin. He's a twit and I love it.

Scorpius gets recurring baby fever any time Rose's cousins pop out a new one, the poor guy. Weasley genes are strong! Thank you so much for reviewing.

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