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Review:Infinityx says:
WHAT IS HAPPENING? :o POLLUX AND THE HOUSE ELF, BOTH DEAD. Wow. I kind of expected that someone would die when I read that description about the brandy being poured out, and Sirius drank it as well! Thankfully, it was just a couple of sips.

But the house elf. Dear Merlin, why? Hmm.. could it be that the house elf was made to help murder all those people? Maybe the elf sealed up the bottle again after the poison was poured into it. And then maybe it couldn't handle the guilt so killed itself? Okay, it's kind of far fetched but I can't think of anything else.

Orion refuses the brandy.. could it be that he knew it was poisoned? This so puzzling! I have no idea how everything is going to fit together! Anyway, moving onward to the next chapter.


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Author's Response: Hi again Erin! :) Ooh yeah - double whammy in this one! Yeah, when drinks get poured out, it's likely something's going to happen, I guess :P I almost had Sirius keel over, tbh, but I changed my mind at the last minute ;) But yes, he's fine... for now!

House-elf... it's a really, really good theory! The house-elf could have helped easily enough - and it could have killed itself or been killed so as not to blab if asked... who knows? ;) But still, it's a really great theory - I love it!

Orion is very suspicious... I did try to leave clues as to why he didn't drink the brandy, but maybe they weren't quite as obvious as I thought... never mind! It's not all that important anyway :P

Thank you so much for the great review, again! :)

Aph xx

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