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Review:Infinityx says:
Oh poor Sirius! The extent to which his family dislikes him is just heartbreaking. He always knew he was something of an outcast, he just never knew it went this far. I just want to hug him, the poor thing! :(

I love the introduction of Alphard into the chapter. He really changes the mood of the story to something a bit more lighthearted, although it's always layered with heavier overtones by the other members.

Hahahaha, he voiced out what, I'm quite sure, almost all the readers were wondering. And Bella, was priceless. I'm starting to like her character, with the way you've portrayed her here. :P

~Erin

Huffleclaw - Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza

Author's Response: Yeah, Sirius really is getting a rough time of it in this fic... it's not necessarily quite as bad as he wants to think it is, though - but I like the idea that he kinda wanted to be lonely, and then didn't want to be when he was, if that makes sense. And he's a teenager, so he's angsty, lol. But yes, hugs for Sirius! :)

Alphard... I actually wanted to include him from the beginning, but it was too many characters with him, and there was no real need for him to turn up until now, so here he is! He is something of comic relief, though ;)

Yeah, the readers probably wanna know the answer to that one! :P (It'll come later, haha) I couldn't resist... Ooh Bella, I'm so glad you like her, as I love writing her. You can do almost anything with her and have it be in character if you portray it in the right way. It's just so much fun to play with!

Thank you so much for the great review! :)

Aph xx


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