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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi Aph! I already read this chapter before, but since I left off reviewing at the third chapter, I'm going to continue on from here!

This chapter was yet again, extremely engrossing and mind boggling! The mystery is getting so much thicker, and no matter how hard I try, I have no clue who the person responsible might be. Druella's death sure does seem like a murder, especially with the way it was described in the previous chapter.

You've got some fantastic imagery in this chapter and everything flows so perfectly without any hitch. Great job there!

Poor Regulus! I love that little familial, caring moment there with Sirius, Regulus and Orion. It's wonderful that you brought that in, in the middle of everything that was happening. It made things seem even more realistic and natural.

Bella really does seem distraught about her mother's death. It's a wonder that the crazed lunatic of a woman that we know could have once been such a youngster, with a shred of humanity in her.

Crouch's disappearance is really fishy. It does seem to suggest his involvement with the whole murder scenario. Well, only one way to find out! Onward to the next chapter!

~Erin

Huffleclaw - Ravenpuff Extravaganza

Author's Response: Hey Erin! Thanks so much for dropping by here - hope you enjoyed the Extravaganza! ;)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it and think it's getting thicker - I'm really trying to build it up without throwing too much at it too quickly. Ooh, does it? Curious :P ;)

Gah, thank you so much! I'm always so worried about flow, since I know I'm generally quite slow, so it gets bogged down.

Reggie is adorable :P I love exploring the family relationships - one of the advantages of this story, tbh - particularly Regulus and Sirius. I'm so happy you liked it too and didn't think it was too out of character - I know the way I write Sirius is a little different to most people's, so it means a lot!

Yeah, I always figure she went crazy in Azkaban, haha. Making her too humane is always a worry, but I'm glad you liked it here and it wasn't too much.

Ooh, Barty Crouch... he is a naturally suspicious person. He just... seems to breathe it out, you know? :P Of course, I couldn't, possibly comment ;)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! :)

Aph xx


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