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Review:Teddy1993 says:
I really liked the part on the Hogwarts Express. The Christmas celebration the D.A. members had was a nice breezy scene, but I was reading it with an anxious feeling because I knew what would happen next. Apparently, the Death Eaters have erased the memories of everyone who witnessed that Luna was taken and judging by the title of the chapter, Edmund Trevett was even killed. I'm curious to what this will lead later on.

I loved the idea for Ginny's gift. It's just like her to do something so personal and it would probably make Harry more happy than the most expensive gift in the world. Great story so far!

Author's Response: Thanks. As I recall, in the original the Death Eaters threaten Xeno separately that they have taken Luna, otherwise he won't know what is demanded of him. The Obliviate is so he doesn't hear that she died. It also obscures the mess up they made from their master.

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