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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
This story looked intriguing, so I clicked upon it. And I wasn't disappointed!

This chapter isn't even 2000 words long, but already the words have moved the action into so many directions! I love how the action flowed, from the receiving of the letter to the graveyard to Lucius' room. Not a word was wasted!

Draco seems to have reformed since the War, if only to redeem his family name. Now this powerful Alpha guy is giving him no choice but to revert back to the old ways. He definitely has become Lucius in this scenario--a desperate guy trying to protect his family while serving an unrelenting master. I can't believe that evil keeps rising up, but that's just the way the world works in the HPverse. I can only hope that Albus Potter is as lucky as his father in trying to defeat this new foe!

Really suspenseful and interesting chapter! I hope to read more soon!

~UnluckyStar57

For the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Yup, evil is a pretty persistent thing in HP, sadly. Don't worry, I plan for Albus to live in the end (unlike Dumbeldore with Harry). But will he beat Alpha? Hhh! Suspense...

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and good luck with the Eggstravaganza!

-Karou


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