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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm reviewing partly for the Huffleclaw-Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza and partly because I want to since this was a really cute chapter.

I love how you include the dark times as well as the light times after Voldemort's death, it shows that everything didn't really go back to normal and become all hunky dory just because Voldemort was dead.

I love that Harry and Ron were stopped by Betty, she really does seem to be Witch Weekly's version of Rita Skeeter. I can just imagine the headline in Witch Weekly about how Ron doesn't approve of Harry dating his sister. That seems to be the big problem at the current moment, publicity. And I do hope that Ron and Harry do visit Hagrid more often. I miss Hagrid, we need more Hagrid. I can just picture him getting all excited because Harry, Ron and Hermione would be coming to visit.

One of my favourite parts was definitely the one where Ginny admitted that she thought about her and Harry having kids. It just made me giggle because those two were being so cute and Harry isn't even freaked out by it. He just knows that he wants to have kids with Ginny as well.

I completely forgot that Victoire was born on May 2nd! It only occurred to me when the lion showed up and announced that Fleur was in labor. It just went over my head that it was May 2nd and that Victoire was born on that day. It's brilliant how you include things from canon in the story, it just makes it one hundred times better.

And Hermione, goodness, it's been almost eight years and she still doubts whether she's a part of the Weasley family, of course she is! She's been through so much with them. I felt a little bit bad for Draco and Narcissa because they seemed so unwelcome and while I can understand why, at the same time I kind of wish Harry had or someone had gone up to them and been a little welcoming or something like that.

And I've thought about a graduation ceremony for Hogwarts students but it was never really mentioned in th seriee. It was implied that seventh years just left and never came back. I guess this year would've been different though and everyone would've wanted to celebrate.

Anyway, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: First off, thank you SO MUCH for such a long and detailed review. It really gives me an insight to your thoughts and I appreciate it so much!

I'm glad you agree that life wouldn't be all sunshine and butterflies just because Voldemort is gone.

Betty does have some similarities with Rita Skeeter.. in fact, I've always thought of Wtich Weekly as the perfect working place for Rita. Publicity must be difficult for Ron, Harry and all the others to handle, even though Harry's been dealing with it his whole life.

I'm glad you liked that little exchange between Harry and Ginny. I feel like their relationship just comes so naturally, so they know what they will want one day (even if it's far off in the future).

I'm glad that Victoire's birth could surprise you a little bit :) I'm quite the canon freak haha, it's nice to have someone like-minded reading this.

Yeah, Hermione should know better, shouldn't she? I guess she's still afraid of intruding on their family moments. She'll learn soon enough. I see your point about Draco and Narcissa, and as bad as I feel for them too, I don't think things would turn around for them over night.

This was meant to be more of a memorial ceremony than a graduation. But yeah, I kind of wish we had got to see a graduation in the books. :)

Again, thank you so much for this review! You are amazing and I don't know how to express my gratitude.

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