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Review:AudenPenelope says:
Oh. My. God. WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE REVIEWS?! This is an amazing start and the idea of it is just breathtaking! And why is there only four chapters? There should be more. Much, much more.

I actually hate myself for having a paper to write because all I want is to read more. Is there more? Will you add it?

Yes, I'm being really ridiculous. But seriously. This. Is. Amazing. Have you thought about requesting a banner and starting back up on it?

Anyway... the actual story...

I really like this line: "You might think this is strange, me holding onto Albus Potter. But itís completely logical to me."

Because, prior to this, I thought you were going for the whole random-out-of-character-for-anyone-because-he's-going-to-hug-a-stranger bit. BUT THERE WAS BACKSTORY! And even more, I love it. Love it.

Maybe not so much that James is offed, but it makes it so original. And I love that Albus comforted her. I want to know more of why they stopped being friends. And oh, I already LOVE Albus.

Okay, I'm done shouting at you. For now. :P

Oh, and P.S. thank you for reviewing my story. Without that, I would never have gotten the pleasure of reading/finding this.

Author's Response: You have quite literally made my day! I lost interest in this story for a time due to school work but I'm working on another one currently and wow. I forgot how much I loved this plot. I will take your advice and get a banner and work on it more.

Thank you for this! Literally, the best pick me up on an off Tuesday!

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