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Review:teh tarik says:
Helloo AD! Well, FINALLY I'm all caught up with the story! Took me awhile but yay, I'm so pleased.

From the beginning, I kind of suspected that Teddy was going to do something propose to Dom, bahaha, and I was right. I assumed that was him in the kitchen conspiring with Victoire and Ian on the best way to do it! :P Seriously, Teddy is my dream partner. I WANT SOMEONE LIKE THAT!!

I love how you wrote a big Weasley family gathering! I always have all the admiration for authors who tackle these huge Burrow gatherings because there are just so many people who know each other really well, and it can be tricky writing these big group situations, but you did it so well. I love Nana Molly and her cookies and her mothering, and Hermione and Percy and everyone. The characters were really well-written, and well-distinguished from each other. I especially loved Hermione and the Wolfsbane potion. Gah, Dom is SO lucky to have such a wonderful and supportive extended family. Everyone is just so good to her. :)

AND TEDDY PROPOSED. What a lovely speech he made, and I love that he made those references to the garden of their childhood. It's so lovely *SIGHS*. Aw no, DOM IS GOING TO SAY NO! D: Hopefully Teddy'll convince her fully in the next chapter!

I can't wait to read the next bit, and what will happen on the full moon! Great chapter, AD ♥


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Author's Response: Hey Nicole! Great to see you back =)

Haha I am glad you suspected something was up as that was my aim xD Ah, don't we all want someone like Teddy? hehe.

It's such a relief to hear you liked the way I wrote the gathering. Trust me, I am not one of those authors who can usually write these huge Burrow gatherings well - I was very very afraid while writing the scene and wasn't sure how it turned out. But your words have put me somewhat at ease and made me happy =) I am pleased you liked how the characters were written including Hermione - she's a major canon character and writing her was another daunting task for me so I am glad it paid off. Dom is very lucky yes =)

I am pleased you liked the speech too - I wrote it off the top of my head with no "planning" at all xD But yes Dom said no.. sorry teddy. *evil laugh*

As for what happens next, you'll have to wait and watch xD

Thank you once again!

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