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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I am here at last with your review!!

So I really loved this chapter because I got to learn more about Sadie's life and it had an adorable Fred and George moment in it. :) Sadie is still quite an enigma, but at least now you've taken me inside her head just a little. The conversation that she had with the Weasleys was really valuable--she said a lot of things, but DIDN'T say a lot more. I'm glad that Harry can sort of empathize with her and that his life with the Dursleys is put into perspective. :)

Just a question to remind myself: Are Sadie's glasses round like Harry's or square/oval/rectangular? Sorry I forgot, and I know it's a silly detail, but I just can't remember. :)

Hermione REALLY got on my nerves in this chapter. I know that she's a bookworm and all, but DANG. That was obnoxious. However, I did learn something about magical New York, which was good. I hope that Hermione tones it down in later chapters. She needs to learn how to listen. :P

That is not to say that I didn't like her, or any of the other characters! I think that you kept them really true to canon, and Hermione was particularly obnoxious in this scene because she was having one of those days where she was like, "I'm Hermione, I know everything!" It's been known to happen. :)

The scene in which Sadie tried to teach the Weasleys sign language was touching and positively wonderful. It's so good that the Weasleys are open-minded and kind. However, I fear the day that Sadie meets Draco Malfoy. (I hope that she punches him...)

Okay, your writing is fantastic. The plot is flowing along nicely, and I see that you've got chapter five up! Good for you! I look forward to reading it!


Author's Response: And I am here at least with your response! Please forgive me. I have admitted now that I can never keep up with these. It's just not something I'm good at doing.

So, you like Fred and George moments. This makes me happy. Any twin fan makes me happy. And I'm so glad you enjoyed MY twin moment. That makes me even more happy.

I am also excited that you are enjoying learning about Sadie as her story slowly unfolds.

Hmmm, no one has ever asked me about Sadie's glasses before. They are not round like Harry's, but they are rather old fashioned. It's kind of hard to describe. They aren't, however, the big framed glasses that are so popular nowadays. If that helps.

Awww, don't be too hard on Hermione. She can't help being a bookworm. And it was really my fault. I was using her bookworm qualities to try and get out some info about magical New York. So it really was me, not her. I will try to remember to have her tone it down.

You are right to fear Sadie meeting Draco. Draco will not be kind to her. She is different, and she's Harry's cousin - a much more vulnerable and easy to get at person than Harry himself is. Of course, all this depends on me actually WRITING this story.

Thank you again. I hope you can forgive the tardiness of this reply.

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