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Review:Veritaserum27 says:
Hi!

Here for BvB review battle. Wow! This was so good! You are a very talented author and have done a wonderful job setting up a great story. I just can't wait to read on!

All of your details appear to be eloquently thought out. I love the characterization of each person - the way Bellatrix is always playing with her wand - so attached to it. Also, you've given the reader a lot to think about. I'm already trying to put together who the killer might be, but it is so difficult with the worst of the worst all in one room!

I can also tell you have some side plots going along - the part with the willl and Barty Crouch. I feel like they are all going to weave together at some point. Fantastic first chapter.

Beth

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

Thank you so so much for that! It's so lovely to hear, and I'm so glad you like it! :)

Oh gosh, thank you! I know I tend to give characters similar traits and habits and things, so I really try to make them different, you know - and here, I just had to make sure they were distinct characters, haha, since they're all Blacks and so likely to be similar in some ways! Ooh, the killer - yeah, it's a very suspicious bunch, lol - though I wouldn't immediately assume anything ;) Wait and see! :P

Oh gosh, I'm terrible at including other plots, haha, so I'm so happy you thought there were subplots and things going on underneath the surface!

Thank you so much for the lovely review - it was so great to get! :)

Aph xx


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