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Review:EllaShanti says:


Yes, I'm back - I know, I've been MIA for the past week coz we were away, where I could use 3G to read on my phone but because my hotspot is a poo I couldn't use my computer to review - anyway, long story short, I'm reviewing now and this chapter... AHHH

So she found out about the superhero!! To be honest, I'm not surprised she had already guessed it. But...she didn't find about about the magic...and now...I'm half expecting her to be moved to St. Mungo's to recover, but at the same time I don't think it'll go that way.

This was such a lovely death scene - well, okay, lovely is the wrong word - but it was almost beautiful...and so SAD! I was definitely on the verge of tears while reading. Good job.

Anyway, fairly short review - but I'm off to do the next chapter now.

P.s. on a side note, the Amazing S-M is on right now. Excuse me for a moment while I admire how adorable Andrew Garfield is. 5 more days till the second one.SO DAMN EXCITED!!! (I'm in Australia, so 17th for me).

P.p.s. I hope this slightly incoherent review made sense... :P

Author's Response: ! I'm sorry !
Ooh, I hope you had a good time! Where did you go? :) 3G is a pain... sometimes it's perfect, and then other times it takes ten minutes to load three seconds of a YouTube video. Yay reviewing!
She did! But yeah, she didn't find out about the magic- Rebecca is trying to protect her as much s possible. The less she knows, the better.
Aww. :) thank you. It really was one of the most difficult scenes I've ever written- I really wanted to do it justice. I'm glad you liked it.
PS. We shall admire his adorable little face together. And I did not know you're from Australia! I have family in Aus, that's so cool.
It's 2 days for you now (sorry it took so long for me to answer) but it's 4 for me so no spoilers pleaseee :D I am as excited as a puppy.
PPS. It did!

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