|Review:||Lobelia Sackville-Baggins says:|
No. NO. NO!
Why?! oh, good God, WHY?!
I told you I was emotionally invested in this story, didn't I?! Why would you do thus to poor Brielle?! Why?! And why would you do it to me?!
Oh, Brielle, you poor dear...
JENNA GREENGRASS, IF I EVER FIND YOU LURKING ABOUT,I'MA STOCK A BROOM HANDLE SO FAR UP YOUR PATHETIC LITTLE BEHIND THAT IT'LL COME OUT YOUR MOUTH!!! I MEAN IT, YOU LITTLE NO GOOD EXCUSE FOR A WITCH!
Now that all that's through, I can't really believe I'm about to say this, but...as a plot device, that dreadful, horrible thing that happened back there was...very well done. Now, everyone, from Dom, who has become a more secure person through opening up to Bri, to Al, who's heart Bri has stolen, to even idiotic sweethearts like Freddy and James, has a chance to showcase just what Bri has done for them, and how much more wonderful (and yes, epic) their lives have become since Bri came into them. That's one of the things I love about this story...it's a romance, but it's also a story about deep bonds of friendship.
So, GAH, I hate you, but... when everything is resolved, it'll be that much sweeter.
And one last thing...you writing style has grown and flourished this whole time, and reading this last chapter, I just got lost in it, since it flowed so nicely together, and I didn't notice any of those persistent typos that like sneaking up on the best of us.
It's gonna be a long wait until the next chapter. Kudos to Leslie for being amazing.
Hang in there, Bri. You and the Wotters will prove Jenna wrong, just you wait.
Love you, Lex.
Author's Response: I'm responding so late, wah.
My heart was breaking for Brielle too - trust me, I know! I'm sorry Lo, please forgive me! I wish no harm on you of course or poor Brielle.
AH JENNA MUST HIDE!!
Thank you lovely! I know it was obviously not what we wanted for our dearest Brielle but we had to reach a climax with some drama, of course. You couldnt be more accurate with that assumption lo :)
You love me haha
Aw thank you! Those typos suck and that means a lot to me!