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Review:Verytaleteller says:
You have got yourself a new reader. Hooked from the start.

The whole idea of the story is fascinating, with Mrs Greengrass having been a spy. I like how you gave shape to and defined all the main characters in such a short time. Also, I think you're doing a fabulous job with the conversations in this story. Not only the cutting comments your characters hash out, but also the way you describe their every uncomfortable shift in their chairs, every hint of fire in their eyes... Ah, I love it.

I share Draco's thoughts on Astoria; she's captivating, and she and the situations she finds herself in keep surprising me. There is no doubt about the outcome of this story - everyone knows Astoria and Draco will get together in he end - but that's fine, as how it will all go down is still unclear.

The old blood magic thing with the snake scar was awesome.
I now sound like a psychopath. Oh well.

Astoria associating with Ginny is something I've never read about before, and I like it. You don't make it sound improbable at all. As to my speculations what will happen next chapter... I'll keep that to me, as I'm much more interested in what you came up with, heheheh.

Merrily awaiting the next chapter ;D

Author's Response: Hello!

I am so excited to have a new reader! Welcome to the evil lair, with drama and intrigue and morally questionable protagonists!

Heehee, thank you! Lavinia's backstory is a lot of fun to work in. You haven't heard the last from her. And I really appreciate your kind words about the conversations! That's so encouraging. I always want to make sure those are just right.

The descriptions are the hardest part--I'm a fairly oblivious person, and Astoria notices EVERYTHING, so I have to think very differently to write her. So I'm really, really happy to hear that you're enjoying them.

Oh, and thank you! I'm fond of the snake scar curse, too. Which...does sound sort of weird, doesn't it? I guess we can both sound like psychopaths. Plenty of room for crazies around here!

I actually love writing Astoria's associations with Ginny, and I'm glad you're in favor. I don't know when it came to me that it was going to be part of the story, but it's always seemed right to me.

See, now I am even MORE curious as to what your speculations are. No fair!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm merrily writing the next chapter, evil laughter and all. I hope you'll enjoy it!

--Penny


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