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Review:ScoroseOTP says:
James seems like a really cocky and arrogant guy but there's something there that makes me love him!
Lily is so different to anything that I've ever read. She seems really fun and I quite like this different take on her. It's quite refreshing.
Al and Aidan were so happy she was out and that immediately made me just as happy. Really cute! But it wasn't very nice to shout at a girl who's just come out of hospital! (Although I'd probably do the same thing to my friends... we joke like that a lot)
I also love how Al brings her chocolate! I can just image her eyes lighting up at the sight of it and feeling all warm inside, while Al feels the same warmth, showing a cheeky smirk!
Rose's little observation of everyone at the start of her POV, was really cute. I liked that.
And the way she deals with Sal is really kind of her (Sal seems nice, I'd like to know more about her and I hope Laura's okay).
BUT WAIT,
WHAT?!
IS ROSE PREGNANT??!!
Another great chapter! Good job!
ScoroseOTP
Emz xxx

Author's Response: Two reviews? I'm feeling very special over here. ;) I loved writing Lily as slightly insane, because like you said, it's a different take than most people's (my original take on her was originally totally different, but I thought the Potter kids needed a mad one) Super glad you liked this chapter, along with the different POVs, and NOT TELLING! If you want that answer, you'll just have to read on ;)

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