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Review:Lostmyheart says:
Oh. My. God.

This story is so brilliant! So... captivating. You've done a seriously good job getting into Morfins point of view, how he sees things, his opinions and how he sees the world. That they should bow for him, see him as the 'king' he is.

You're extremely talented.
I especially liked these sentences:

His father is furious, of course. He vows Merope would never set foot in that nest of cowards and mudbloods. He refuses to admit his children are anything other than mighty.

The cottage has a smell, of earthy, cold things, slippery things. It smells of mould and old vegetables and piss. Merope is constantly stumbling over herself her eyes point in different directions, her mind is blinded by fear and misery, and she only seems to see clearly when the handsome Muggle from up the road rides by so frequently.

How you described her almost made me laugh but also pity her. She wanted more than what they had and she was deeply in love with a muggle, the forbidden muggle.

I loved reading this story, and I liked that it was short and still full of details.

Big hug,
Avi

Author's Response: Hi Avi! :)

Wow, thank you so much! I'm so honoured that you liked this story and thought it did justice for Morfin. He was a really interesting character to write, and yes, he really has his superior view of himself, the poor guy. He was just doomed to be miserable.

Aw, poor Merope. :( I'm glad you liked those lines, especially the second bit about the cottage and Merope as those were some of my favourite parts. I agree - she is both pitiable but also almost comical, just because she's such a helpless figure who is almost mocked. I really feel sad for her, and for Morfin, in a way.

Thanks so much for the lovely review! :)


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