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Review:Twinkleflower says:
I was not too sure what to expect from the story summary but it must have been effective because I was certainly intrigued by your premise. I must commend you on your choice of main character, as I personally think original characters are the hardest to write. You have done a really good job setting up the character of Ellie. She has several qualities that make her perhaps more interesting than your average OC, such as being a twin, can see dead people, is a neighbour of the Potters. I think there is a fine line with creating realistic OCs but I think you have managed it. Some of your plot lines are not 'new' ideas but I didn't mind that. I am quite interested in seeing where you take the storyline from here and I am hoping you are going to put your own spin on it. Overall I really enjoyed reading the first chapter: it is an easy read, your character is very likeable, and I think it has a lot of potential.

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad you like Ellie! I find it harder to write canon characters because I'm afraid to change things about them and then they end up being not canon.

My greatest worry with Ellie is making her too Mary Sue, so I'm so happy that she doesn't seem that way to you, but she's still interesting.

A lot of my plot points aren't new ideas! I'm so impressed that you stuck through despite that!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You have me feeling all warm and squishy inside :)

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